Too long, cut out the light stand animations, the rusty car, the polkadot mootcycle, bear turntable, possibly rusty car scene. You need to get down to say 20-30 seconds with this material. Some of the stuff is good some of it is not, and the way you editit makes peopel remeber the bad stuff.
So its not showing the best assets very optimally.
Otherwise theres some good stuff in it and some bad.