# Adelaide Grey

**URL:** https://forum.highend3d.com/t/adelaide-grey/65025
**Category:** wip
**Created:** [May 30, 2006, 10:34am UTC](https://forum.highend3d.com/t/adelaide-grey/65025 "2006-05-30T10:34:15Z")
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### Author: ![kpbelsha](https://forum.highend3d.com/letter_avatar_proxy/v4/letter/k/b3f665/32.png) [@kpbelsha](https://forum.highend3d.com/u/kpbelsha)
#### Post date: [May 30, 2006, 10:34am UTC](https://forum.highend3d.com/t/adelaide-grey/65025/1 "2006-05-30T10:34:15Z")

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![](http://photos1.blogger.com/blogger/4474/2005/1600/skintest.jpg)

Here is a link to the Blog I set up for my short film Adelaide Grey. I'ts about a third of the way through production and I'm trying to post often for crits on how to improve it.

[Adeliade Grey](http://adelaidegrey.blogspot.com/)

Glenn

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### Author: ![user\_deleted](https://forum.highend3d.com/letter_avatar_proxy/v4/letter/u/35a633/32.png) [@user\_deleted](https://forum.highend3d.com/u/user_deleted)
#### Post date: [June 12, 2006, 1:10pm UTC](https://forum.highend3d.com/t/adelaide-grey/65025/2 "2006-06-12T13:10:53Z")

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Hmmm I think the eye looks a little like it's going to pop out of it's socket. She also looks a little sinister ,That me be the look your going for I don't know? If it's not I would recomend making iris of the eye a little lighter in color with a much smaller dark ring around the outer edge of the iris.