Architectural

[chrisjupp]

hi everyone, this is the first time i'm showing my work to anyone other than my friends so...be honest
This is actually my first work using Maya that got marked! tell me what you think (i hope this works)

[user_deleted]

Nice work goolia

But your lighting is a bit out of wack, The light reflected off the table is white and really too bright compared to the yellow lights you have above the mirror. oh you might consider turning down the specularity on the table shader as well, But othere than that it looks ok

[rival2000]

Where is that white light coming from? and it would probably look better if you lessened the edge on the shadows... if you're using depth maps then increase the filter, if you're using raytraced then increase the radius and probably the number of rays. It's decent though, keep working.

[chrisjupp]

Cheers guys,
yeah the lighting is a bit dodgy, i know (lol) and it's not the only thing that is wrong with it I'm yet to back track in my assignments and fix everything so i can put them in my show reel. But keep them coming and i might put some more jpgs in for you to critique. Cheers!

[anadin]

Not a bad start, I would for sure brighten up the lights, perhaps give it some more anti so you dont have the jagged edges.

[chrisjupp]

Figured out where the white light is coming from!! It's the flurecent light above that has been cut out of the picture.