# cartoon animation
**URL:** https://forum.highend3d.com/t/cartoon-animation/65886
**Category:** wip
**Created:** [October 13, 2001, 10:54pm UTC](https://forum.highend3d.com/t/cartoon-animation/65886 "2001-10-13T22:54:15Z")
**Posts on this page:** 3
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### Author:  [@atmantotherescue](https://forum.highend3d.com/u/atmantotherescue)
#### Post date: [October 13, 2001, 10:54pm UTC](https://forum.highend3d.com/t/cartoon-animation/65886/1 "2001-10-13T22:54:15Z")
hi, here my character test animation. I just want to test it...
I expect your comments...
bye.
[www.terra.es/personal/abecab/anima/personaje\_volar.avi](http://www.terra.es/personal/abecab/anima/personaje%5C_volar.avi)
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### Author:  [@ploi](https://forum.highend3d.com/u/ploi)
#### Post date: [October 14, 2001, 5:16am UTC](https://forum.highend3d.com/t/cartoon-animation/65886/2 "2001-10-14T05:16:57Z")
well you do expect my comments so.................
the jumps look a little weak. There is no real sense of weight as to the forward motion. The legs and body look good. The fall could come forward a little more also. try playing with the camera to get a better effect for the punchline - I don't think it is portraying it's meaning very well at this point.
Like it but needs refinement.
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### Author:  [@atmantotherescue](https://forum.highend3d.com/u/atmantotherescue)
#### Post date: [October 14, 2001, 7:46am UTC](https://forum.highend3d.com/t/cartoon-animation/65886/3 "2001-10-14T07:46:48Z")
Hi, thanks for the feed back.
bye.
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> In reply to:
> well you do expect my comments so.................
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> the jumps look a little weak. There is no real sense of weight as to the forward motion. The legs and body look good. The fall could come forward a little more also. try playing with the camera to get a better effect for the punchline - I don't think it is portraying it's meaning very well at this point.
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> Like it but needs refinement.