Feedback On Our Work

[director]

Where does everyone go to get feedback from others? I have a composite that isn't complete, but I want to see if I'm headed in the right direction.

Our main character is leaning against a wall giving some dialog, then the camera goes through the wall to another room.

This is the end of that shot with the vfx. (obviously not color corrected, etc.)

http://dynamicfilm.com/competition/48\_hour...torted\_wall.mov
(quicktime 7.0 required)

Any feedback is appreciated.

[user_deleted]

I find that vfxtalk.com has a fairly active community where people comment on each others work quite a lot

[user_deleted]

I would go completely opaque befor existing the wall. Do not use the standard shake noise has back of the wall.

[user_deleted]

I am not sure the move is as obvious until we are into the next room

[director]

The camera is on a dolly track. It is locked off untill the end of the person's dialog then it tracks out. There is more of the end of the clip, but by then we are photographing other elements on set that are unwanted for the finished film. ( and we have finished the move through the wall)

.... Question #2. Is this an acceptable place to ask for feedback?