Here is a link to the Blog I set up for my short film Adelaide Grey. I'ts about a third of the way through production and I'm trying to post often for crits on how to improve it.
Glenn
Hmmm I think the eye looks a little like it's going to pop out of it's socket. She also looks a little sinister ,That me be the look your going for I don't know? If it's not I would recomend making iris of the eye a little lighter in color with a much smaller dark ring around the outer edge of the iris.