Animation critique (3)

wip
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Please critique my first animation done in 3D Max:

http://www.ifilm.com/ifilm/skeletons/film\_...,661998,00.html

if the above link doesn't work please go to www.ifilm.com and search for "Ouch My Noggen"

please also feel free to critique my website at:

www.crosswinds.net/~zachjacques

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Looks good! Could have been planed out a little better though - it realy dosn't say anything - there is a long, did I say long, sequence where he is dancing all over the place (which is done well) that could have been cut in over half. It realy dosn't add to the story. You should try and use animatics the next time you do one of these. Over all the most impressive part was the animation by far - good work.

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thanks for the constructive feedback...I will definitely try using animatics next time