Another head model

wip
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Please critique.

http://www.zing.com/picture/pe475469a75cc0a913722a94d0264294d/fe72107f.jpg.orig.jpghttp://www.zing.com/picture/pe475469a75cc0...7f.jpg.orig.jpg

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Funky!!

i like it, cant really give a good crit though, apart from maybe the face looks a little elongated, but maybe thats what you want.

leach

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The eyes are a trip!! Really cool.

Eric

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Thanks for the responses guys. I tend to make faces long. I tried shortening it a little bit and it just didn't look right. I always mess up my proportions so is there anything that you guys think is specifically elongated, like the nose or forhead? There's something about the model that I just don't like. Maybe it's the dumb look on its face.

http://www.zing.com/album/?id=4292628373http://www.zing.com/album/?id=4292628373

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Eyes and ears look really great!
The nose is a bit to angular for my taste but ok.
I don't like the teeth and the gum, they are to straight and angular. It just destroys the overall impression the show through the partly open lips....

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you may try closing the bottom eyelid a bit. he looks really wide eyed like hes in a daze. look in a mirror to get the proportions of the eyelids compared to the retna. it should probably atleast touch the bottom of the eyelid or get really close. on some it over laps on both the bottom and the top( of course all people are different). as far as being enlongated is concerned, i dont think it looks unrealistic at all. i happen to know a guy whos head is shaped just like that. in fact it kind of looks like him. i like it. nice work

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err...just another added note, he doesnt have a nose bridge. even women have one at the slightest. that will thicken the nose and break up the continous slope he has going on there. the teeth are too straight as well. add some alignment variations to them. as far as the eyes go, probably just rotating them down a little may cure that

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Thanks doc. I made some minor adjustments from your comments. I'll fix the teeth later. For now I'll just keep the mouth closed.

http://www.zing.com/album/?id=4292628373http://www.zing.com/album/?id=4292628373