Please critique my work. This was done in subD and was based off a character in the D&D Monster Manual. I'm looking for some good tips and suggestions concerning the modeling only. I would appreciate your info greatly. Thank you.
http://www.geocities.com/mjm662001/beholder2.gif
http://www.geocities.com/mjm662001/beholder3.gif
http://www.geocities.com/mjm662001/beholder1.gif ID="edit">Edited by jagar on 03/13/01 11:33:05 PM.
Nice work, but I think creating a good shader for the beholder will be the hardest part.
It would be great if you could post what you used as reference, but I guess that might be a bad idea since those images are copyrighted.
Still, most beholders I have seen have a larger central eye, and even the eyes on the eyestalks seemed a bit more rounded and developed. It is hard to say though since I have seen them drawn in many different ways.
There are some jagged edges in some areas of your model though, particularly in beholder3.gif around the eyestalks.
Pretty cool though regardless.
-Spiritwolf
nice model! ( at this point texturing it will make it or break it )
What im saying is, if the texures look nice it will be awesome!
This is just my opinion.
