Body Critique

Here's the body I have so far. Please excuse the seams.

http://members.home.net/lancelet/Bodys.jpghttp://members.home.net/lancelet/Bodys.jpg

Thanks

-Lancelet

Hei man.....what are you doing....she was my sexy curly nice eyes girl.....what's with all that fat ???....make her thin like a french girl....
Legs and arms are right....no, the whole things is right, there are some details I would ask you to resolve, please....make the gambs a bit thinner also the stomach area....she's almost pregnant.... Hei man don't feel bad about me, this are my tastes when it comes to a woman....hehehe...

Merry Christmass and Happy New Year from Romania !!
gagiu

Hey lance, that is looking really good. I actually like that she isn't super thin like most of the female character designs, but I think the general shape of the stomach area needs just alittle work. Hmm, maybe I can show you what I mean. http://www.geocities.com/sithos/Bodysfix1.jpghttp://www.geocities.com/sithos/Bodysfix1.jpg

Great body! Truly amazing.

I have criticized this already in the Pros section, Sithos picture clarified my point. I would like to have added yet another red line at the lower stomach (in the side view) making it flatter. Don't misunderstand me, not smaller, I'm just talking about the shape.

Thanks for the critiques. Sithos, could you clarify on what your lines indicate? I'm not sure I understand what the dotted lines are for.

ahh.. the dotted lines are just muscle groups based on an anatomy book i was looking at. they probably wouldnt show up too much in a your model, but they help when you are trying to indicate shading of muscle groups or deformations.