Well I didn't feel that this was up to the prof section so I just posted it here. Check out the candy store. It isn't the greatest (yet) - I still need some signs and a cash register but I very much enjoyed working on it and wanted to share. If you have some feedback, good or bad, bring it on - anything that comes to mind - just some feedback if you have any in you!!!!
mmmmm Candy!!!! good mmmm.
i like the image very much, this is what i notice besides what you said about the labels and register. (when you make labels i might leave a couple of jars labelless, just to mix things up a bit.)
the selves look a little weird because they a have wood or copper? like material on the fronts but on the inside its grayish.
i might soften up the edge of the light that falls in the top self next to the sign
maybe change whats in the jars so that not all of them have all the same color/candy in them, like the jar on the counter. make some half full or half empty 
im not sure what the shiny balls are in the middle shelf (but ive never been in a candy store before so....)
these are just little things though you really could leave them and it would still be ok, but the main thing i see is that im not sure where we are as viewers, are we in the shop or looking through the window? (i would say in, but theres a little something weird about it.) i like i shadows of the sign, that i am presumming is on the window, but cant tell. the only other thing that throws me is the copper ball and the metel curvy thing. THats what holding up the counter? Is the ball suspended in mid air? also the ball on the floor thats on the bottom of the curvy looks more like a glow to me than something solid that would hold up a counter. also the curvy looks like it could use more spans, it gets alittle jaggy, and i would like to see it super smooth.
anyway i do really like the image, just trying to nit-pick to help
the lighting is very nice, i definatly get the open airy happyish feeling of a candy store. nice work.
I like the image too, this image has a potential
Well LoneRanger has basically said what I wanted to say. I think there is a lot of unnecessary reflection which is distracting. It could be the lights placement.
I like the sign shadow casting on the inside of the store. Why is that gold thingy on the Jars? It is distracting the viewer from the candy! If u remove it, I'm sure the image will look more colorful, that's just my opinion 