Character W.I.P

Hello everybody! This is my first post here. Nice forum. This here is a character that I'm working on for a short movie. Currently I'm setting it up for animation. If you have any comments I'd be glad to hear them! Keep up the good work.


"Do not follow where the path may lead. Go instead where there is no path and leave a trail."

Noice. Very noice.

Just a couple of things I can crit. Maybe the shape of the head and the hands could be made more artistic. They both still look a little blocky, especially the front view of the head. Perhaps you could really pull the cheeks outwards?

The thumbs are great, but if you look at your hand from the side you'll see that they sit a lot lower than your character's.

You could also have a crack at modelling some simple kind of waviness into the gown he's wearing. It doesn't really look natural just hanginf totally uniformly like that.

Nice eyes though. I like the whole thing a lot.

Thanks for the crit. I've changed a couple of small things on it. The gown will be more "wavey" in the animation, at least If I can get it to work the way I want

"Do not follow where the path may lead. Go instead where there is no path and leave a trail."