Comments please

http://cmpa.ca.scad.edu/website/nieberle/index.html
This has some shots and inprogress stills for an animation i am working on... Sorry about the sites organization, or lack of it. I will keep updating this site until I finish the animation.

Here is a little still from the site.

Thanks for your comments.

nick

nice work! the only thing that looks unrealistic to me is the depth blur that you have going on... on the man reading the book; you have about 2 inches from his hand to his arm where it goes from extreeeemly blury to perfectly clear again. Its not a bad idea to use it, but tone it down a bit. Your skin texture on the "young person" pic from your site is really good. overall your characters are very nice. you should also sharpen up your backrounds a little as well.

dylan

Textures, materials, & shaders
http://www.afflict.nethttp://www.afflict.net

This scene also gives you great oppertunity for drastic lighting that you could take more advantage of. Go for more contrast.