Concept art + renders

wip
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the follwoing are images for my independent short
pls crit me on the character design and the color, lighting of the concept art
thx!

[image] http://viper-07.no-ip.com/test%20renders/ROB\_GI2com.jpg [/image]
[image] http://viper-07.no-ip.com/test%20renders/PRO\_test1.JPG [/image]
[image] http://viper-07.no-ip.com/test%20renders/3.JPG [/image]
[image] http://viper-07.no-ip.com/test%20renders/ADV\_test1.JPG [/image]
[image] http://viper-07.no-ip.com/test%20renders/NAK\_test1.JPG [/image]

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i dunno why i can’t link the image to appear in the forum directly…
anyway…
here’s the link to all the images:

test renders
http://viper-07.no-ip.com/test%20renders/page\_01.htm

concept art
http://viper-07.no-ip.com/storyboards%20co…rts/page\_01.htm

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and see if u got any thoughts on this projects
and do u like the characters?

it’s a story actually, an independdent short.
thanks~~

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Seems like some pretty nice stuff.
I would pose the first one. You obviously are capable since the others are.
I don’t think the first is as strong a character as the others. It is a nice design, but with such basic shapes it doesn’t show well in the default pose. I definitely wouldn’t post that one as first in your list.

Urp