Coposition project need some critics :)

this is my first composition projects,I really like to heard any suggestions from u all, all critics are wellcome

I did the entire projects by myself, from Storyboarding,
shooting, colur correction, cg plates, and final composition

Quicktime 3.84MB

Here is the link
http://home.exetel.com.au/plasticx/PageData/VideoData/PhotonJR2.movhttp://home.exetel.com.au/plasticx/PageDat…a/PhotonJR2.mov