Critic Needed Desperately . Help Plz

[sagun-manandhar]

Hi,

It's a project i've been working. the work time is almost 60 days . the budjet is appx $1,000 which is bit high for client in nepal, but half for me. Project teaches and i work. but if an art is not published you know how it feels eventhough you get paid. client is completely unsatisfied. i think client demands hollywood. but it's beyond my knowledge. it's agency's concept. Not texturing the homes and replicating was aggreed between agency and me earlier due huge scene and rendering time. i think i tried all my best for that amount of money and time. Now after several rejections from the client side, i am quite hopeless. I think i lost my judgement. May be it's really bad to be released. Any ctircs, suggestions or treatment is highly welcome.

Here is the link

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vUN1QCarfh4

Thanks,
sagun

[arrigob]

The buildings falling apart look awesome. The only thing that really stood out to me was the camera movements. The were all over the place. I felt those could have been done a little smoother and maybe different movements with them. The one where it shoots up to a aerial view just seemed out of place. Nice work though and will probably be suffice.