Critic this please

Hi this is not my first post on this project but I decided to make a little movie so you guys can better see the model

the files are .wmv they are alot smaller I think

here you will find her without texture (496 kb)
www.angelfire.com/empire2/ieu4u/Joan\_No\_Text.wmv

here you will find her with texture (488 kb)
www.angelfire.com/empire2/ieu4u/Joan\_Text.wmv

That is badass. I am way impressed.

After following the link to your homepage, and looking at the screengrabs, I have a couple of comments.

Her feet are a little off. Might want to even out the cv's / vertices to smooth them out a little bit. As you mentioned on the website, the eyes needs some reflection or something. They look a little dead right now. Overall I think it's great work, though! It's a great game character.

Ok so you can follow a tutorial and you did that well... but why not follow the tutorial and turn it into your own character by changing things, it doesn`t take much and is much better practise.

Thx for the advice and critics, I am thinking of creating my own model but I will try to do it without the tutorial for better practice but Ill have to look up a couple of things for sure tho.

I cant wait to go and learn this in University...
wish me luck for my admission tests.

I had no idea it was a tutorial. But still, even following a tutorial that well, is impressive. You're on your way buddy.

Very bad ass model. Nice.

And yes, I agree, let's see you do your own. Sketch it out in both front, and side view, image plane it, and do your own now.

Later.