Critique this shot...

Hey all,

New composite, planes animated in Maya, compositing in Shake.

Codec required to view these movies (DivX 3.11):

http://www.divxmovies.com/codec/

Completed 9 second composite (1.41MB):

http://www.robzeigler.com/movies/Invasion2\_DivX.avi

Breakdown of shot elements; 1 minute (5.80MB):

http://www.robzeigler.com/movies/Invasion2...akdown\_DivX.avi

Enjoy. Comments welcome.

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-FS_RAZ
http://www.robzeigler.comhttp://www.robzeigler.com

thats a pretty good composite... a few things, though:
1. it looks too much like video , and i don't think that was the look you were going for. deinterlace, pulldown to 24 fps, maybe reduce the contrast a little more, and some small film grain always helps
2. the reflections of the planes stood out to me .. i think they might be too light. also, shadows would be awesome (though difficult for this scene)
3. and i hate to say it, but the scale of the planes to the trees they are flying through -might- be off .. but it could be correct for the lens you are using..

even if you don't fix any of these things, its still a kick ass composite, and i dont think you have to worry about your grade on this project.

-jon

Thanks Jon, great tips. I will look into implementing your suggestions!

-FS_RAZ
http://www.robzeigler.com

I agree, great composite work! But the reflections should be stronger. That's a very reflective lake. During the breakdown the reflected buildings and trees got much darker, yet the planes actually lightened up, almost a screen effect. Doesn't go with the other reflections.

jose,

In hindsight I think it was a screen effect. The breakdown shows that the planes were simply flipped, but what the breakdown does not show was that their brightness was greatly reduced to .1 of 1 (the breakdown was just so long and boring : )

Because of your keen eye though I'm going to go back and take a look at those reflections. Thanks for the help!

-FS_RAZ
http://www.robzeigler.comhttp://www.robzeigler.com

awsome stuff man. the reflections werent bad, though its not everyday that you see planes flying over a lake to differentiate between.

www.geocities.com/doc675k

doc,

You're right, it's not everyday that you see Japanese Zeros flying over a lake! : )

-FS_RAZ
http://www.robzeigler.comhttp://www.robzeigler.com