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!~demo reel~! (2)

yellowsayshello 2005-05-24 20:59:04 UTC #1

Hello!
I wanted to post my reel. Mostly, I just want to figure out how to make myself better, so take a moment and point out all the problems.

thank you guys and have great week!

http://www.yellowsayshello.nbim.net/images/3D/reel\_mp5.mov

bishop00s 2005-05-24 22:26:21 UTC #2

I think the work itself is pretty good... but I feel like the lighting on your turntable renders could use some work. It wasn't real easy to make out the details on things and didn't quite do your texturing justice. It was just a little too soft I think. Just my opinion though.

maxmad 2005-05-26 10:57:13 UTC #3

The female figures good but I agree with the other post you need lights. A filler for the underside and one for the camera direction are the minimum. Keep them soft but you need to show your work more clearly to let people see what you're capable of so get it lit good and bright. Try and align the different phases of your model turning so transitions are smoother and think about reflections on vehicles and turntables. Get that female walking.

joojaa 2005-05-26 15:06:30 UTC #4

if not walking atleast demonstrate thet the polygon layout is such that it is well suited for animation defromation. Without thet your not going to ge of any real use in animation.