Film in progress

hi every1…this is my final film charactor Teenu…i’m still fixing the rigs…but soon it’ll be done…Teebu is a funky kinda kid..loves to read comic books and fond of wrestling shows…critics are welcome…

shash

http://www.shash.8k.com/photo.html

whoa .. thats one hellova unibrow.

pretty good

OMFG!!! LMFAO… it wraps around his head!!

hehe, but good work, post the film when its done, i wanna see it!
(also, his arm is sticking out of his shirt, which you can clearly see in the rear view of the character)

Great pose. Great hands. Great design.

Don’t completely ignore the teasing about the ‘unibrow’: that area needs a little more clarification so we know if we’re looking at hair, or part of the hat, or what. Also it’s not clear from these shots what’s sticking out/up from the sides of his head.

Hmmm. ‘His’? Or ‘her’? Is it a female? --If not, you might want to tone down the definition in the chest. The pecs seem a little too defined for such a young kid.

I like the idea of the sneer, but the don’t like the shape of the mouth.

The eyes seem a little dim; bump up that diffuse level or something. Adding a little point light dedicated to adding specular hits to the eyes might also be a good idea.

Good work, thanks for sharing.

-Steve

I agree with the comment about the pecs, and also after looking at it longer, i’d say his bottom is pretty large and defined for such a kid. I don’t know how else to say it kids…butts…weird topic…anatomical or not…

That brow has really got to go, and I’d say give him more of a forehead, but your characters proportions are so exaggerated that this might be exactly the look you are going for. There is however a noticeable seam on the back of his wrist in the back shot.

I think overall this is a good model, and the style is definently interesting. Even though the proportions are exaggerated you manage to pull it off. I personally think his hands are too exaggerated for their own good, but that’s just personal pref. Nice work!