Firefly

[looksoon-sun]

Anyone wanna give some critique on this? It is just a very short clip from a music video I'm working on.

Note: there are more details I would like to add (such as a very light fog and more depth in raytracing), but I'm about maxed on render time. Basically I just wanted to get an idea of what people think about it. Note I adjusted the levels on my home monitor and have noticed differences on my work computers - so if it seems too bright or dark - I'm still working on that.

http://www.mychemicalsoul.com/movies/FlyForestSidePan.mov
(7 mB - should probably download instead of stream - my server is crap)

[c-kyr]

First of all, awesome model and background imagery. My first tip would be to maybe have the camera follow the firefly's movement instead of having it follow a straight path, it would make for a more dramatic effect. Second, maybe increase the firefly's flight speed as it seems unnaturalistic moving so slow.