Freighter SpaceShip Eitonah!

Hello everybodies !

My name's ISANA Bruno from Reunion Island.
I worked in a CG studio like creative and director to realise advertisements in 3D.


Title : Transporter SpaceShip Eitonah.
Software : 3DS max 6
Time : About 10 hours.

Thanx for crits

Looks good, you know of course that space ships are often done in cg. That being said you've got a cool look. What do you want to do with it? I'd try to get a more refined look to the engine exaust. It looks like it's just a glow turned way up. I like it, but if I'd critique anything I'd say see what you can do. Otherwise it's pretty pro. Lets see it in a shot.

Hello Destruct007 !
Thanx for your interest !

I make some modify on the reactors. To get a greater scale to my ship. I do a deck entry too on the side.

I just want to do a movement of camera on this ship which travell to an orbital spaceport. A shot of 15s long. I juste want to do it with a cinema look.

What do you think about it ?

Ahhh, I think you should do more. 15s is nothing for animation. You're just animating a ship pull into port, that could be 2 key frames. Add at the very least a planet shoud be in the shot, but that is more to show off textures. So I donno I'd blow something up, but that's b/c I'm an effects artist. So I donno have fun with it.

Did somebody say "Red Dwarf"?

Hehe, seriously though, I'd be adding lights along the hull of the ship to break up the shape and give it more of the scale you were aiming for. Once it looks good self-lit, adding scene lighting (ie - a sun or a nearby planet) will give it enough detail to stand on its own. It'll also add more detail visually without additional modelling.