smaller Windows Media:
http://www.danieljay.com/jazz\_dancer.wmv
on YouTube:
http://www.youtube.com/user/danjaymaya3d
larger quicktime
Quite okay, how long did it take for you to make it.
Some small crit:
Theres some proportions that are slightly off in the face. Like photo reference double perspective syndrome.
The animation is nice only somewhat boring. Lacks some weight at times. Camerawork breaks the line of the story confusingly many times.
I agree - it has the potential to be very beautiful but some of the motion is a bit weird, slightly mechanical and not obeying the laws of gravity. I think if you nailed that it would feel a lot more exciting. That said, it's still better than anything I've done!