Mafia-Game Artwork

[antonyc]

Hi I ve just finished it and waiting what client say...
Please write me your opinion

=) Peter

http://www.3D.sk > http://www.3D.sk
http://www.fineart.sk > http://www.fineart.sk

[ricedragonls96]

The face is okay, but how should I put this without sounding like someone we all know? Your graphic design skillz are sub-standard. This design is way too simple. Also, the grainy black and white photo thing is WAY overdone. You might as well have added a big red photo-marker circle over his face.
Also, there is too much black. What sort publication is this for? it's an odd layout for a magazine. Is it for TV or flyers or something?

(just kidding E.O. don't flame me)

[antonyc]

I wasnt specific enogh , its wallpaper
And dont make jokes from that supid dirty b... ))

However I agree that composition isnt best ( I like black on wallpapers and old fashioned BW photo efect too , can you please anyone write or sketch what composition would be better? I got one head, one logo and one sentence to compose, THANX!!!

=) Peter

http://www.3D.sk > http://www.3D.sk
http://www.fineart.sk > http://www.fineart.sk
Edited by levius on 11/15/01 04:26:21 PM.

[leach]

personally i really like this....it gets the mood across. okay, maybe it's no technical masterpiece as far as the grainyness goes, but i think it works well for this particular piece. the only gripe i have is with the ear lobe, a bit too angular and solid looking. maybe try a bit of a brown/baege tint to it..instead of pure black and white...but then again maybe not.

did you model this head yourself?

if i was your client...i would be happy.

leach

In reply to:
I wasnt specific enogh , its wallpaper
And dont make jokes from that supid dirty b... ))

However I agree that composition isnt best ( I like black on wallpapers and old fashioned BW photo efect too , can you please anyone write or sketch what composition would be better? I got one head, one logo and one sentence to compose, THANX!!!

=) Peter

http://www.3D.sk > http://www.3D.sk
http://www.fineart.sk > http://www.fineart.sk
Edited by levius on 11/15/01 04:26:21 PM.

[antonyc]

Thanks Leach, I feel much better now )),
yes its my model, however I ve remodeled it from lowpoly game model by Roman Hladik ... (illusion softworks team Brno)

=) Peter

http://www.3D.sk > http://www.3D.sk
http://www.fineart.sk > http://www.fineart.sk

[boxershorts]

He looks a lot like a manequin to me. I would imagine from the stressed look on his face that there should be a few wrinkles in the skin around the mouth, the sides of his nose (near the eyes) and across his brow.

The cylindrical neck needs more definition and I agree about the earlobes. However, I do like the black grainy photo effect and think it's fine for this image. The jacket, shirt and tie look really nice as well.

[antonyc]

Thanx for enspired feedbeck, I will shure play with his Bump map ))...

=) Peter

http://www.3D.sk > http://www.3D.sk
http://www.fineart.sk > http://www.fineart.sk

[antonyc]

I just get call from client and he sayed that its totaly [censored] and I got remove his logo from it, so nobody would asociated it with Mafia )

=) Peter

http://www.3D.sk > http://www.3D.sk
http://www.fineart.sk > http://www.fineart.sk