Hi,
I am just begining on 3D and this is a videoclip I did to a friend...
http://www.gas-station.com/bona/xperimentalhttp://www.gas-station.com/bona/xperimental
tanx
Bona
very quickly done it looks like - I proably speak for alot of people when I say I have no idea what to say. What exactly are you looking for by posting this here. Your message was to say the least as vague as the piece. If you are more specific people could help more. lol 
i agree with nanoform.
one hint i would give is that if you are just getting into 3D, as you said, then id start a little smaller than attempting a whole story...type thing...or whatever it was!! i presume you want to get into animtion, so that is what you should consentrate on. once you have got to decent level with this, then you should find you get much better results on larger projects that you want to attempt.
one other hint. try not to go down the easy route of producing something that you think will shock people or offend them, just to try and get a reaction. people rarely accept this kind of work. you should aim for to raise emotions from the viewer, but never disgust. the reason i say this is because i get the sense that this is what you were maybe trying to acheive with the whole shagging of the robot that was bent over the car thing. this was not entertaining, not even in a Jerry Springer kinda way!!
Ok,
the first thing I must say is that I didn
Well then first off - you should study cinimatics if you want to tell a story.
Then MAKE A STORYBOARD AND ANIMATIC!!!!!!
Work on your modeling, texturing, lighting, animation and backgrounds. If you master all of these things you will be granted your position as a Sigraph finalist. Good luck.
The thing I found most lacking in this video that would have made it better was synchronization. It would make a big difference if the characters and movement worked with the music. I would have been great if the robots seemed to playing the music of if there was any correlation between the music and act of [censored] the robot.. but there wasn't. Plus by the end of the video I really wanted to see something shocking and was disappointed that it was only shockingly juvenile.. why not go ahead and get explict with the sex act at the end.. this video will not be seen anywhere anyhow so you might as well go all the way 
Sincerely
Adrian
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