I like the actions. I would look a bit into adding more anticipation and a feeling of inertia (weight in motion).
As far as camera angle(s), I would get much closer to the action and set the camera to a wide angle (maybe 20) and be looking up from a low down maybe at the ground. I might do a slow orbit of the camera as I dolly up and in... to maybe waist height and full frame by the end of the sequence.