I think i remember you have posted this before...waaayy back...It's good to spend more time on your projects. Keep it up!
Here are some things i noticed that can probobly help you:
The dialogs and some scenes might be a tad to long...if you shorten them you will make it more interesting and save yourself some precious render time
In several spots the voices are to silent or the music is to loud, i couldn't understand what any of the characters were saying.
Movements look much better then before (and so do the models), but they are still quite choppy...work on that.
Looking forward to see the next one! Good luck!