Work in progress

thewatchman · October 5, 2001, 9:46pm

I would like some critique on this orc model im workin on, it would be greatly appriciated.

/JoZ

sneak444 · October 6, 2001, 3:42am

Nice bro, Real nice.

I'd give the hands a little more love, thats about it tho....mabey legs too

peace,

Toby
-Satan is my air freshener.

el-diablo · October 6, 2001, 10:29am

I would look at shrinking the top teeth it may be difficult in closing the mouth. also have the default face pose with mouth closed. but for the modelling it looks fine. keep up the good work....el-diablo

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thewatchman · October 6, 2001, 2:57pm

Thanks for the critique!
I will correct the teeth, and add a couple of legs=)
How does his proportions look? I guess there

lovefailer · October 7, 2001, 9:14am

looks cool from here.. maybe another view.. and a fill light. or just a complete basic 3 point lighting scheme.

n8D

film-maker · October 8, 2001, 12:32am

Nice work. Maybe you could adjust the shader so his skin doesn't look so glossy? The modelling looks fine.

thewatchman · October 8, 2001, 6:01am

Thanks again for the critique!

The model will be fully textured so the shader is only temporary but I see what you meen. I

ramanolls · October 9, 2001, 3:07pm

Whoa! that is awesome!
There's one critique that no one else mentioned. Model in some detail of the Latisimus(did i spell that right) Dorsi muscles. The Orc already has some pretty well defined muscles in the arms and the chest. from that view, the Lats should be fairly visible. Every muscular creature should have some back muscles to help it look balanced out.
Did I mention it looks awesome?

thewatchman · October 10, 2001, 12:48am

Here is a small update with some new angles and ligtning.
Unfortunately I haven

ramanolls · October 10, 2001, 2:33am

We could call this guy Shrek's older, meaner brother.

sneak444 · October 10, 2001, 3:14am

If you wouldn't mind could you post a wireframe?

Peace,

Toby
-Satan is my air freshener.

thewatchman · October 10, 2001, 8:06am

I don

ramanolls · October 10, 2001, 1:58pm

Do you plan on animating this?

fredc · October 10, 2001, 2:56pm

Very nice work. Here are a couple of items to check.

The deltoids and pectorialis muscles (chest) sort of blend together in the wrong place. If you extend the clavical, it is close to this imaginary line between the two muscle sets. Yours are much, lower. Get a muscle mag, or some other reference, and see if you can observe what I am talking about.

Just some stuff to think about for your next project. Great job, thanks for posting.
Urp

jack-lemmon · October 10, 2001, 5:11pm

thewatchman · October 10, 2001, 9:58pm

Hey!

Thanks for the pointer Urp. I will look into it and try to correct it asap.

I

lovefailer · October 11, 2001, 10:06am

looks cool, now finish him !

n8D